Education
college tuition should be reduced, reason being is because if it continues how it is now, we’d never get out of that 1.4 trillion debt that we’re in with ourselves. In the concept map we’ve made it demonstrates/shows links that explain the many pros and positives that would be beneficial to our messed-up economy.
This picture shows how badly we let this issue slip by our hands, thinking we wouldn’t be affected if we the youth of proper age to vote.
https://www.edvisors.com/plan-for-college/money-saving-tips/tuition-cuts/
this site explains the over all benefits to having reduced tuition, one of the ways it benefits is the students… obviously, and it benefits the school as well, because it brings more students to their school and makes the school well known.
Inquire: Have you considered to explain how does students’ debt affect college students? Instead of saying, ” we’d never get out of that 1.4 trillion debt that we’re in with ourselves.” By describing the students’ debt, your audience and I will be more attractive to your blog. If you read your blog, you will see that you are creating a request for information that will confuse your audience because you are not providing it for them. I recommend you to add “Among the Class of 2018, 69% of college students took out student loans, and they graduated with an average debt of $29,800, including both private and federal debt. Meanwhile, 14% of their parents took out an average of $35,600 in federal Parent PLUS loans” (student loan hero). Also, tried to explain why they are these debts so your audience will see you as a credible person.
source: https://studentloanhero.com/student-loan-debt-statistics/
Inquiry: When the issue is high tuition costs and you want to persuade your readers especially currently enrolled students, help reduce the college tuition rates, you might want to give them a rough idea on how they can help you and themselves in achieving this goal. I would like to provide this link https://www.theatlantic.com/business/archive/2012/02/5-ways-to-make-college-much-more-affordable-for-all-americans/253564/ as a source to help students and colleges rethink their current traditional methods and adopt alternative ways in achieving or providing education education. This might help them provide quality and only necessary knowledge related to their field of interest thereby reducing tuition costs
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Inquiry: When the issue is high tuition costs and you want to persuade your readers especially currently enrolled students, help reduce the college tuition rates, you might want to give them a rough idea on how they can help you and themselves in achieve this common goal. I would like to provide this link https://www.theatlantic.com/business/archive/2012/02/5-ways-to-make-college-much-more-affordable-for-all-americans/253564/ as a source to help students and colleges rethink their current traditional methods and adopt alternative ways in achieving or providing education. This might help colleges provide and students grasp quality and only necessary knowledge related to the field of interest thereby reducing tuition costs.
Inquire: I feel like you need to have a little bit more information regarding your topic. To maybe attract the reader to be more interested in the topic, you should show what you think is a good idea on lowering tuitions. You could give them a rough idea on why this is important to students who have to pay high tuitions for college. I will link a website explaining what you should talk to the readers. https://www.usnews.com/education/best-colleges/paying-for-college/articles/what-you-need-to-know-about-college-tuition-costs
I like the ideas and how you all use diagrams to explain your blog topic. In my own point of view, student dept is a very serious issue that has been going on for years and will still go on for many years to come. To be realistic, I don’t think the reduction of college tuition will be possible any time soon, instead, the cost of higher education will be higher as will be elaborated more on the link below. https://www.bestvalueschools.com/understanding-the-rising-costs-of-higher-education/
Inquire: I like this blog its simple to understand but there is a lack of information about the topic one source that would help you would be this one https://www.edvisors.com/plan-for-college/money-saving-tips/tuition-cuts/
it explains with graphics , facts, and examples how it would affect everyone. And shows the types of colleges that reduce the tuition.